Punctuation for Effect

Punctuation does more than just clarify the meaning of a text. We can use it to create particular moods or convey specific effects, such as suspense, surprise or emphasis.

Learning these techniques can make your writing more dynamic and engaging.

Ellipses (…)

Ellipses have a variety of purposes within sentences, including the indication of omitted (left out) words, creating suspense or showing a trailing-off thought.

  • Indicating Omitted Words – If you are quoting a text and want to shorten it or focus on a specific part, ellipses can be used to indicate that some words have been left out. For example, an original quote: “She had a vibrant, sparkling and infectious laugh” might be shortened to “She had a… infectious laugh”.
  • Creating Suspense – Ellipses can be used to create suspense by indicating an unfinished thought or a pause before the final part of the sentence. This can make the reader eager to find out what comes next. For example: “She opened the door, and then… silence.”
  • Showing a Trailing-Off Thought – When a speaker’s voice or a writer’s thought trails off into silence, ellipses can be used to represent this effect. This can be useful in dialogue or in first-person narratives. For example: “I thought I knew him, but now… I’m not so sure.”

Exclamation Marks (!)

Exclamation marks are used to express strong emotion, surprise or emphasis. They are a powerful tool, but remember to use them sparingly in formal writing to maintain a professional tone. Overuse of exclamation marks can make the writing seem overly emotional or immature.

  • Example 1 – Expressing Strong Emotion: “I can’t believe we won the game!”
  • Example 2 – Signifying Surprise: “What a beautiful sunset!”
  • Example 3 – Indicating Emphasis: “You must not go there!”

Question Marks (?)

Question marks are used at the end of direct questions, prompting the reader to consider a response. However, we can also use them to create rhetorical questions where no answer is expected, often to make a point or stimulate thought.

  • Example 1 – Direct Question: “Will you be attending the party?”
  • Example 2 – Rhetorical Question: “Is this the best we can do?”

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